Outline of improvements needed before deadline

We showed Louisa and Marisa (my media teachers) the footage of our latest music video. They suggested that we should improve on:

The structure of our video; they said it was evident that we just put the all the clips on adobe premier and just cut it whenever we heard the beat. Whereas we should of structured with day scenes first and then add the night scenes afterwards which actually makes it visually better so we are appreciative that our teachers told us that comments. Thanks.

What me and my group are going to do before the final deadline:

For the first intro we're going to show establishing shots (day ones) in the beginning. As well as use cameos that are in the day aswell.

We decided to use day scenes until the flicker is heard where on the last beat on the flicker, we will then transition to the night scene.